Tuesday, 13 September 2011

HW due Wednesday14th September

1) Write a first person account, in role, of the events leading up to the photograph in the PP. 
2) Comment on at least 1 thing you find interesting about somebody else's account.

15 comments:

  1. i am the farmers daughter and today i woke up to my dad shouting and my mum crying, i ran screaming to my dad but a lound noise stopped me i hide crying rapped in my blanket like a ball and i didnt know what to do i heard my mum calling my name but i couldnt move i woke up this morning and my dads farm had gone my playground had gone i was lonley left with nothing.....

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  2. there were bullets flying everywere i was so scared. on of the bullets hit my teddy bear. then i heard this big bang and i wondered what it was i went to have a look and there was people were falling over i wasnt sure if they were sleeping so i ran up to one of them and i saw it was a soldier who was friends with my daddy my mummy called me so i ran back indoors and lied on the floor and fell asleep

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  3. It was about 2 minutes after i ordered the soldier to scout the village and shoot all the enemy found, we heard alot of gunfire around the village so we knew they were in there. it was all normal gunfire until a split second after a bullet was fired you could hear a little child scream in pain, i ran over and watched as the farmers 5 year old daughter fell dead to the floor lifeless. the farmer then ran out of the barn and over to the corpse of the little girl, the soldire apologized and tried to confort the old farmer but it was no use. nothing in the world could bring her back. we were both full of sorrow and guilt, we will never forget what happend.

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  4. Yesterday, the was a bomb that hit an air base in Iran it was a direct hit. We spoke with an American soldier he was the one who fired the bomb. It was delayed because they had to get all there men out of the air base, they killed 50 people and a further 200 people were killed by the bomb it also destroyed a local village near by the people here were terrified they saw a big white cloud of smoke and dust it is scary how these people have lost loved and are now in shock maybe one day they will get over the lost of most of there friends and family.

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  5. Yesterday, the was a bomb that hit an air base in Iran it was a direct hit. We spoke with an American soldier he was the one who fired the bomb. It was delayed because they had to get all there men out of the air base, they killed 50 people and a further 200 people were killed by the bomb it also destroyed a local village near by the people here were terrified they saw a big white cloud of smoke and dust it is scary how these people have lost loved one and maybe one day they will get over the lost of so many friend and family.

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  6. Yesterday, the was a bomb that hit an air base in Iran it was a direct hit. We spoke with an American soldier he was the one who fired the bomb. It was delayed because they had to get all there men out of the air base, they killed 50 people and a further 200 people were killed by the bomb it also destroyed a local village near by the people here were terrified they saw a big white cloud of smoke and dust it is scary how these people have lost loved ones and maybe one day they will get over the loss of so many friends and family

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  7. yesterday there was an bombing on an air base which also took out a village in iran the bombing went of about 1 oclock and when the bomb exploded i was scared and worried i asked the general what was going on but he didnt know either and when i looked out side everything was destroyed there was fire engines and dead people.A british journalist questioned us about the bombing and we told we told him that it hit an air base and took out a village and we said that we were in the middle of sorting something out then the bomb went of and then every thing went quiete.

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  8. it's such a awful, terrible tragedy. people have not only lost there home and belongings but there lives too my heart goes out to those who aren't guilty, but putting that aside i have a duty and i plan to stick to it, i am confident that we can reach are goal.This can be a difficult situation to be in as you never know whats going to happen next or how you can carry on. An awful lot has happened in this small space and not that we plan to but this could happen to many more spaces big or small and personal I'm a bit anxious over that.

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  9. I was in my barn when i heard gun shots outside.
    I went outside and saw my wife dead on the floor i was devistated, then i was my 5 year old daughter over my wifes dead body crying and screaming, then i saw a man at the end of my drive with a gun who had shot my wife i was shocked. I went over to my wife and daughter on the floor, and a few seconds later the man drove of in a car, a few moments later their was a rumbling sound of planes in the sky dropping bombs on the fields and in the town i was in fear that i was going to be killed. But they didnt bomb my house or barns, and when the bombing was over and i was feeling scared and frightend and didnt know what just happend.

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  10. A Local farmer!
    Hiya I'm so devasted on what has happened to my home village! The American army ordered the American soilders to bomb our village! I'm mostly sad and angry of what they have done to us! We have done nothing wrong to them. They have ruined my farmland crops and animals which was what I earnt my money from! Also my poor daughter cannot sleep a wink as she is worried there gonna do it again! They have left so many people homeless and jobless I'm very confused on why they got ordered to bomb our country not others why us?!!
    COURTNEY SMITH

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  11. it was 2 a clock on a sunny day when it was quiet but suddenly out of no where came a bomb and it destroyed this house.It was horrible,the people who live here are devestated to watch there friends house be destroyed.I have spoken to the neighbours and one of them said"it is a horrible feeling to feel after actually see the bomb come out of no where and smash the house,it is unbeliverble to think that a bomb came from no where and hit are friends house".the noise was horrible when it hit the house there was screaming and crying.the villiage is silent and everyone is starring at the house.the police are asking eye witnesses what happened and everyone is upset at the momment.

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  12. As usual I was watering my crops and doing general things around the farm i had been working so so hard and was shattered so decided to take a break. As i sat down i began to hear a stomach churning noise. It was a mix of people screaming and a rumbling noise. I stood up to see if i could see what it was when an enormous cloud of smoke rushed towards me. I ran to cover and stayed for a while when i came out i was horrified I froze, and walked gently around all of the rubble to see if there was any survivors. I was very thankful that it was not me who was injured or even killed, but felt incredibly sad that the rest of the people with in my village had tragically been killed.

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  13. 2.30am this morning i witnessed a american bombing on afghanistan, it is not yet known the general made the orders for the attack but the american president will soon be announcing why, it is also thought to be that the afghanistan president is planing to do a response attack on america.the town is in devistation after 98 people died and more are thougth to be under the rubble,there may be a bomb that has not yet gone off but the rescue teams are trying there best to get everyone out safely and unharmed. mollie best 9x4

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  14. yesterday i ordered mymen to blow up a big city near to are old camp. they were so acurate the bomb landed right inthe middle of the city, thousens of poeple deid.On the on the upside i can gust picture all the medels me and my solders will be aworded. but how ever much i try i can get rid of the guilt of being responserble for so many deaths. I cant amagon all those houses distored and the devestation of the city, but its part of my job i gess i will gust have to put up with it and move on. but all in all that day was a good day for all of us amicans and the war still goes on.

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  15. this morning i orderd my men to blow up the city after that we ran back to the old camp. and we camped it out there whilst we wait for something to go on i felt quite qultiy for it i saw alot of childern cry when i went to sleep all i heard was people screaming i think it is the guilt of whay i just did.

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